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Postby Dana Brooks on Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:43 pm

You have left me breathless
By your caressing and touch
I want to leave you breathless
Because I love you very much

I've never felt this way
I'm loving every minute
I would'nt ever want to imagine
Life without you in it

What would life be like
If you were not here with me
I know it would be so lonely
Just think how sad that would be

I hope you're mine forever
I hope that we are never apart
I hope you always leave me breathless
Because you're the beating of my heart

(c) Dana Brooks...7-04
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Postby Jeff Guest on Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:59 pm

Just beautiful Dana!!! Another masterpiece!!! Love them all!!! :D
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:09 pm

WOW!!!! Love that ending line!!! FANTASTIC!!! Love this one lots, Dana!!!
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Postby misty_golden_rose on Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:14 pm

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Postby bradmurphyackermanms on Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:31 pm

Beautiful love poem, Dana!! You expressed yourself so well in this one!! Great write, my friend!!! :D
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Postby DeaconSteve on Sat Apr 29, 2006 10:19 pm

Well, in my mind, you are definitely a superior poet, an awesome poem my friend. Keep them coming. I have a feeling that you are going to recieve many ecards in the near future, besides the ones you already have. :lol:


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Postby Dana Brooks on Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:15 pm

thanks Jeff..appreciate it very much... :D
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Postby Dana Brooks on Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:15 pm

thanks Deb..glad you enjoyed it.. :D
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Postby Dana Brooks on Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:16 pm

thanks Misty... :D
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Postby Dana Brooks on Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:17 pm

once again thanks alot Brad.. :D
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Postby Dana Brooks on Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:18 pm

Deacon Steve thank you so very much for your kind comments... :D
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Postby webmaster on Mon May 01, 2006 9:47 pm

Dana Dana Dana! I simply love the way you write poetry. It really hits the sweet spot. This one is definitely an e-card:

http://www.nethugs.com/breathless.shtml

Thank you again for sharing your creative talent. It's a blessing to have you here at NetHugs.
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Postby DeaconSteve on Mon May 01, 2006 10:53 pm

And I get to be the first to CONGRATULATE you my dear friend. an awesome poem, an awesome ecard, spectacular masterpiece by both you and the Webmaster. Just GRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!


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hi

Postby john316meansu on Mon May 01, 2006 11:35 pm

wow.. you should say this is a love song. I think it would be beautiful to sing it to the one you love. great job...
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Tue May 02, 2006 12:45 am

Congratulations, Dana!!! Beautiful ecard, my friend! :D
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