The Children

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The Children

Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Feb 13, 2006 6:11 am

~The Children~

A little girl, so all alone
Sat crying, so forlorn
Her little dog had ran away
Her heart was broken and torn

A little boy, the same age as she
Asked her why she cried
She looked up, with tear-stained cheeks
Her pain she could not hide

She told him of her little dog
That she just loved so well
And how he'd ran away from her
To where she couldn't tell

She said she'd called his name outloud
But he did not come back
She'd told her mommy and her dad
About her doggy, Jack

She'd asked if they would help her find
The little dog she loved
But they were much too busy again
So she prayed to God above

She asked if He would help her, please
For Jack was all she had
He loved her unconditionally
Not like her mom and dad

The little boy dropped down his head
His bare foot kicked a stone
He said his dad had went away
His mom leaves him all alone

The little girl looked up at him
Said it sounded like he was the one
An angel had said she'd meet a friend
And soon her trials would be done

The angel had said that the friend and she
Would find her little stray
And as they gathered him close to them
God would lead the way

She didn't know exactly what that meant
She just knew angels never lied
So with trust she held out her hand to him
Her smile growing wide

The little boy then took her hand
And they ran off down the street
They stopped and questioned everyone
That they chanced to meet

As they rounded a corner, they spotted Jack
In the street where he'd been struck
They ran out and gathered him close to them
They didn't see the truck

Two angels and a little dog
Abandoned here on earth
Were taken home by God that day
And given a brand new birth
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~Postword~
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Show your loved ones every day
That they are special and loved
You never know when they might be
Called home by God above
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Written by: Deborah Lynne
February 13, 2006
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Postby Doug Holt on Mon Feb 13, 2006 6:21 am

WOWWWWWWWW

Simply awesome a lesson here for sure Deb

certainly gives each and everyone of us FOOD FOR THOUGHT.

One of the best . E card inspirational for sure.

Thanks for sharing your God given gift Bev.


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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Feb 13, 2006 6:24 am

Thank you, Doug! Glad you liked this one. I thought it might be too sad to post. Luv ya, my friend!
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Postby Jeff Guest on Mon Feb 13, 2006 9:05 am

Beautiful gets my vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Postby littlefeather500 on Mon Feb 13, 2006 11:22 am

Good job net sis. a beautiful sad story. Love it
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Feb 13, 2006 11:49 am

Thank you, Jeff! I appreciate your kindness!!!
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Postby bradmurphyackermanms on Mon Feb 13, 2006 12:20 pm

Nothing is ever too sad for you to write, Deb!! You just keep cranking them out and I'll keep reading them. Although very sad, this one was AWESOME!!! Thank you much for posting this!
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Postby hisheart on Mon Feb 13, 2006 12:22 pm

Good Morning, Deb

That was absolutely beautiful....so inspired. I just cannot believe your talent. Thank you so much for a beautiful story. It was sad, but not really when you think of where they are now.

And, I agree with you that we should hold everyone we love dear to us everyday because we never know when it will be our last encounter, at least in this life.

This world is not my home. We are all just passing through.

Blessings,
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Postby whoscookie on Mon Feb 13, 2006 4:49 pm

Awwwwww Deb so sad----but beautufully written----Great message too
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Feb 13, 2006 6:38 pm

Thank you, Donna. Glad you like this one! Luv ya, Spirit Sis!
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Postby Miss Caroline on Mon Feb 13, 2006 9:19 pm

WOW!!!!!
So beautiful....So Sad.....So full of inspiration...... :cry: :cry: :cry:
What was that you said about "Writers Block" I think it just needed a rest.
Love your poem....Love you Sissy.
GOD loves You, and so do I.

Luv Ya

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Postby skipper on Mon Feb 13, 2006 10:03 pm

Absolutely Beautiful. I need kleenex again.
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Postby zodiacmate on Mon Feb 13, 2006 10:55 pm

awwww it breaks my heart :cry: so sad... :cry: very inspiring
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Tue Feb 14, 2006 8:36 am

Thank you, Brad. That means a lot to me. Luv ya, my friend!
Deborah Lynne

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His name is Jesus Christ.
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Wed Feb 15, 2006 6:09 am

Thank you so very much, Karen! I'm glad you liked this one! I was hoping people might see the end results as you did!! Luv ya!
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His name is Jesus Christ.
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