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Postby norman on Sat Nov 12, 2005 2:19 am

Smile my love
And I'll smile for you
Always be happy
And never be blue

Be happy we're together
Right here in our hearts
And pray nothing will happen
To tear us apart

Let's praise each day
As if love was new
And pray our love
Will always be true

We was brought together
With help from above
And so we know
This is a special love

So smile my love
And I shall grin
As we both hope and pray
This will never end
Last edited by norman on Sat Nov 12, 2005 12:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Sat Nov 12, 2005 9:56 am

Beautiful, Bro. Need to capitalize the word "I" in the last verse second line.
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Postby zodiacmate on Sat Nov 12, 2005 7:06 pm

very nice, im sure she's smiling. :) coz if its me, i will :lol:
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Postby LadyMustang on Sat Nov 12, 2005 7:34 pm

very Beautiful Norman hope she knows she is a lucky lady

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Postby norman on Sun Nov 13, 2005 1:30 am

thank you deb alice and wilma for liking my poem...lol i'm sure she'll like it as well
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:37 pm

Has Judy seen this one yet?
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:43 pm

What...no hanky panky stuff, Dotty????? ROTFLMREO
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Postby Guest on Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:47 pm

Well you know Deb I did think about it
But you know I'm very shy lol
Um
norman I love you too baby
And don't forget the cherries and whip cream if you visit me
You handsome dude!
))(( )))(((
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:48 pm

That's more like the Dotty I know!!!!! LMAO
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Postby Guest on Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:57 pm

Well thanks Deb
I knew I would find myself again
And then there was light
Oh boy I'm not sure if there is really much hope of me ever being normal.
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:58 pm

Just think of it as normal for you!!!! LOL
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Postby bradmurphyackermanms on Mon Nov 14, 2005 10:56 pm

Sorry I overlooked this one before, Norman. Great poem! Liked that one. Yeah, I think she should like this. And, Dotty!!! You sure brought back some sweet memories when I read the cherries and whipped cream thingy. Except I was always partial to the strawberries, myself!!!! LOL
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Nov 14, 2005 11:07 pm

Ummmm Yea, what Brad said...LOL.
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Postby bradmurphyackermanms on Mon Nov 14, 2005 11:08 pm

You, Too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Nov 14, 2005 11:29 pm

The strawberries?.....OH YEAH!!!!!
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