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Postby oleman on Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:17 am

FOREVER

How long is forever?
Is it the rest, of life?
Does it come with our dying breath,
Or at the end of strife?
Does it follow along the calendar
And the cycles of the moon?
Will it arrive like a shooting star
And flame out much too soon?
Could it be just one moment
Suspended in our time?
Is it really so much more
Than a single shivering spine?
We may never hope to find
Which one might be the way.
Just know that I will love you,
That long, and one more day.
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Oct 24, 2005 7:25 am

WOW!!! Beautiful, Oleman!!!!
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Postby Babygirl_4_lyfe on Mon Oct 24, 2005 11:00 am

prettiful!!!
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Postby Miss Caroline on Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:32 pm

Keep it up guy...... we love them all.
GOD loves You, and so do I.

Luv Ya

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Postby webmaster on Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:36 pm

This one was beautiful. Congratulations oleman, it's a feature:

http://www.nethugs.com/forever3.shtml
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Postby Miss Caroline on Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:43 pm

Congratulations Oleman you deserve this honor. See Mr. Poe!!!
GOD loves You, and so do I.

Luv Ya

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Postby Deborah Lynne on Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:43 pm

Congratulations,Oleman!!!! I knew this would make a great ecard!
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Postby Babygirl_4_lyfe on Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:56 pm

congrats!!!!!!!
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Postby oleman on Mon Oct 24, 2005 8:35 pm

thank you all. what honor?e-card?
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Congrats Oleman

Postby Alex on Wed Oct 26, 2005 10:25 am

Beautifully written...exactly how I feel about my special person. 8)
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Postby Guest on Wed Oct 26, 2005 11:28 am

My husband is in the hospital today and we have been married for 42 years.
I'm going to print this poem and take it to him.
Thank you so much for such a beautiful poem!
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Postby Cutest_Jewel on Wed Oct 26, 2005 11:45 am

wow you're a very talented writer wish i was that good!
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Postby oleman on Wed Oct 26, 2005 7:08 pm

c.j.
thank you but there is no good or bad - it just is what it is.
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Postby Miss Caroline on Wed Oct 26, 2005 7:24 pm

Like I always say."Beauty is in the eye of the beholder"
GOD loves You, and so do I.

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Hello!

Postby Shirley Shaw on Thu Oct 27, 2005 12:12 am

Hi,Oleman,
This is Shirley Ann Shaw;
From,Raytown,Mo.
I really enjoyed your Poem,
And it Made a beautiful E-Card!
Congratulations,on That Too!
"God Bless"
Shirley Shaw(Raytown,mo.64133
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