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Three Wishes

Postby latinadiva on Tue Oct 11, 2005 4:15 pm

If I could have three wishes
And wishes did come true,
I would wish for blessings,
To always follow you.

I would wish for laughter
To fill your heart and home
And memories surround you
Whenever you're alone.

Then I'd wish you patience,
to forgive what might go wrong
I'd wish for love and peace and joy
To follow all day long.

I'd wish for you good health,
Friends and family galore
And when you have it all
I'd even wish you more....

I'd wish for prayers,
To give back unto myself,
As long as you are happy.
I'd wish for nothing else.

If I could have my wishes,
And if wishes did come true,
I'd wish for years of happiness,
And I'd give them all to you.

For just to see contentment,
On your face and know you're fine,
Would truly satisfy me
And bring joy to this heart of mine.
Tyann
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Postby Miss Caroline on Tue Oct 11, 2005 4:35 pm

That is sooooooo good Tyann. I bet you have another feature.
GOD loves You, and so do I.

Luv Ya

CAROL
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Postby latinadiva on Tue Oct 11, 2005 5:01 pm

I hope so
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Postby bradmurphyackermanms on Tue Oct 11, 2005 6:56 pm

Tyann, that thing has "FEATURE" written all over it. That was beautiful !!!
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Postby latinadiva on Tue Oct 11, 2005 8:30 pm

Thank you Brad so happy that you liked it. I really hope the webmaster thinks that it can be a feature I would be so happy.
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Postby Babygirl_4_lyfe on Tue Oct 11, 2005 9:26 pm

im touched!
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Postby latinadiva on Tue Oct 11, 2005 9:50 pm

Glad that you like it Amber
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Postby norman on Tue Oct 11, 2005 11:54 pm

that is one of your better one yet tyann and i'm yet to read a bad one keep it up
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Postby webmaster on Wed Oct 12, 2005 12:58 am

Tyann really knows what I like. In my opinion, this one is her best one so far. Here's a page I made for her:

http://www.nethugs.com/threewishes.shtml

I hope you all enjoy it. Remember if you want to get featured, simply follow these simple guidelines:

1. Correct spelling.
2. Upbeat and sendable.
3. Not in ALL CAPS.
4. Preferably rhythms.
5. Non specific so that our visitors could send it as an e-card.

Thanks again Tyann for such a beautiful piece!
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Postby latinadiva on Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:44 am

Thank you Norman lol
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Postby latinadiva on Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:44 am

webmaster your awesome thanks alot
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Postby morbidfreak88 on Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:47 am

That is so cool!I love it to pieces!LOL!he he he he he!LOL!
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Postby webmaster on Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:48 am

My pleasure! BTW Tyann, do you want your real name on the piece as appose to just your username on the forum?
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Postby latinadiva on Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:49 am

That would be great I would appreciate that
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Postby webmaster on Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:51 am

Would Tyann surfice or would you want to submit your full name?
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