Melting wings ~ ~ ~

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Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by mystery » Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:40 pm

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Flying but with wings of steel,
Just want to tell you how I feel.
The sun is hot and your breath is cool
As we plunge into the deep blue pool.

It mends my wings and takes my breath,
You saved my soul from certain death.
Kisses from you reign down on me
As we dance our tango beneath the sea.

A beautiful ballet just you and I
Fallen from the sun kissed sky.
Together we float in an ocean of dreams
Where the water is warm from the silver moon beams.

This night we swim for shore together,
A night like this could last forever ~
Moonlit sand in an hour glass
Shows time running out, but we want it to last.

Somewhere in the distance I hear a chime
Warning of us of the end of our time,
But love is strong and we’ll see tomorrow
and your smile will be an end to my personal sorrow.


I love you ~ ~ ~ M

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Re: Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by Jeff Guest » Fri Jun 19, 2009 7:15 pm

Absolutely Awesome, Wow!!! I don't believe I have enough words to give this proper praise, Mystery!!! This is a superb piece of poetry!!!
"For God’s mercy reaches unto the heavens, and His truth unto the clouds" (Psalm 57:10, NKJV).

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Re: Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by Hope » Fri Jun 19, 2009 7:45 pm

I agree with Jeff this is amazing, you are so gifted , I can't wait to read more of your writings,
God Bless You
Eva Dimel

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Re: Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by Sir Daniel » Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:08 pm

hey baby, when i read the ending stanza of this beautiful write by your talented pen i can't help but think of your phone battery beeping while we were talking, how we had to say so much in so few minutes because we knew although neither of us had the ability to say goodbye, the darn phone would do it for us..

to quote Sunny & Cher.. "you got me babe.."

really enjoyed, your abiltiy to write from darkness, to humor, to heart to even the weekly challenges just amazes me.

Daniel

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Re: Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by Brenda Pike » Sat Jun 20, 2009 5:32 am


MYSTERY, A MAGNIFICENT LOVE POEM. LOVED EVERY WORD OF THE POEM. GOD BLESS YOU AND DOUG. SINCERELY

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Re: Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by Pokey's Heart » Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:03 pm

WOW...awesome, Mystery! What more can I say? Nothing.

always,
Denise
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Re: Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by mystery » Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:34 pm

Thank you so much for your lovely words, as you may know, Daniel is my inspiration. He has a heart like no other, it shines and it is my light. Mystery x

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Re: Melting wings ~ ~ ~

Post by Pokey's Heart » Sat Jun 20, 2009 7:00 pm

You've a wonderful man, Mystery, and he has a wonderful woman..
God's blessings upon both of you!!!
love always,
Denise
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