~~Of Missing Parts~~

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~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Pokey's Heart » Sat May 23, 2009 12:41 am

Often times, I'd sit and wonder,
What life might hold for you..
And you, of course, would understand
The reasons why I do.

Do you know how much I needed you?
Because it's in you, I find....
Those parts of me I need the most,
The reasons for the rhyme.

So many things I thought I knew..
Until God shared you with me...
Now, I've pondered other thoughts,
Of life as it's going to be.

So these, I'll keep within myself,
Since you know where to find,
Shadows I'd forgotten about,
In corners of my mind....

Mirrored in your eyes I see
Reflections of my soul..
Handle please, this heart with care,
That piece of me you hold.

You, I love, but this you know,
If only I now could find a way,
To show you just how much I care,
God speed that blessed day.

~~~For you, Jeff~~~
~~May 2009~~

love you endlessly
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by DeaconSteve » Sat May 23, 2009 1:22 am

So what it this, make people "Cry NIght" Pokey, or rather should I say morning? WOW girl this is awesome, one awesome and very toughing love poem, and is suitable not just for your special love Jeffrrey, but I'd bet a whole lot of folks would like to get this one as an E-card. I sure do hope someone submitts it. This is one of the most beautiful and touching love poems that I have ever read, and I'm not kidding one bit. Masterpiece written all over it. Wait until Jeff reads this one. Love it, love it, love you, love you both. Oh, I can't wait either. You both will be so joyfilled. Thank you for sending the link, didn't want to miss out on this one. **********That is TEN STARS!!!!!!!!! Be blessed.
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by B Lawyer » Sat May 23, 2009 1:45 am

Dear Denise.....This is such a beautiful poem filled with love straight from your heart. With each word, one can feel the love you feel for Jeff and the longing that lives in your heart. I agree with Steve....this should be an E-card. Many people would enjoy sending this to a loved one. I hope Skip is paying attention. Thank you, so very much, for sharing your innermost feelings with all of us.

May God continue to embrace you and Jeff and may He always hold you close to His heart.

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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Doug Holt » Sat May 23, 2009 4:31 am





Skip This just has to be an E Card For Sure.

it Has everything.

Denise this is surely your best.

GLYASDI. * * * * * KUDOS.

Doug. :)
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Jeff Guest » Sat May 23, 2009 9:11 am

This is one of the most beautiful & soulful love poems that I've ever had the pleasure of reading Sweetheart!!! You surely poured every bit of your sweet heart into this most exquisite write, thank you so much for this wonderful gift!!! I Love You!!!
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Pokey's Heart » Sat May 23, 2009 10:19 am

I'm so glad you liked it sweetheart, I love surprising you.....I love you always,
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Katie » Sat May 23, 2009 11:03 am

Denise Ann & Jeffrey Paul Guest, what more can I say about this wonderful and loving team. I ask God sometimes to let me see Him work, and he joins these two wonderful people together, and they share their love with us. Words come tumbilng out of their hearts, and fall on posts, because their love is so intense, they can't hold it inside. Their love grows with God's wise assistance and they take up pen and write whats on their hearts. This is an absolutely beautiful and heartfelt poem Pokey. It touched my heart so deeply that it must of knocked Jeff's socks off.

...So these I'll keep within myself
Since you know where to find
Shadows I'd forgotten about
In the corners of my mind"....

I just love this stanza Only someone that loves you so much would know you this well. Marvelous write sweetheart, so loving and so heartfelt. I sure hope Skip sees this soon. It's going to make a wonderful e-card!!!!! I agree with you too...

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Post by wvhillbilly47 » Sat May 23, 2009 5:00 pm

Dear Pokey!!
WOW, I read your beautiful write of love, and got right up and did a full RiverDance routine.....high stepping to the ceiling......smiles
The love you have for one another just jumps off the pages of your writes! :D
May you always hold such love in your hearts!!
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Happy Holmes1 » Sat May 23, 2009 5:29 pm

Oh Pokey, this made me cry, it's so beautiful, heart touching and reaching to the depths. I sure hear your precious heart on this one. This made me cry because of the love you two feel for each other, and It reached my heart b/c I realize even more, my love for my Honeybears! Thank you for not leaving this personal, but sharing. -Dawn
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by hisheart » Sun May 24, 2009 2:07 am

My Sweet Pokey Bee,

Now, I know all about how beautifully you can write, but this one is really magnificent. You surely did find the right sweetheart to give you the rhymes. Together you are the perfect love poem. Every word of this beauty reflects such perfect joy in such a sweet love. You know I could not be happier for you!

My heart will always rejoice in the love you and Jeff have been given by God. I love you both my sweet friends.

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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Pokey's Heart » Sun May 24, 2009 7:58 am

I sincerely thank each one of you for your lovely comments..God bless you always,
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Hope » Sun May 24, 2009 8:13 am

This is so Beautiful!this is what true love is all about and I am so happy that you and Jeff found it.
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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by Chee Chee Martin » Tue May 26, 2009 4:59 pm

I am so glad you sent me the link to this beautiful and loving poem my sweet Pokeypops!!! I have to concur with what everyone has said before me ~ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My heart tried to literally leap out of my chest as I read your words of love to Jeff!!!! You know how I feel about the both of you ~ love you both BOOKU!!!! I have never been so happy as when I found out you two had hooked up!!!! I've been wearing a perpetual smile since then!!! :-) Acoss time and space you two have found each other!!! Each heart searching for the other!!! And then finally becoming one hearbeat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!! Love this heartfelt poem and I dearly love you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-) Big Booku Hugs and Lots Of Love ~ Chee :-) P.S. I will be seeing you both soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-) Right? Hee-hee!!! :-)

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Re: ~~Of Missing Parts~~

Post by wordworx » Wed May 27, 2009 6:34 pm

Strong emotions bring forth the most cogent and surprising thoughts at times---and usually great inspiration for poetic themes. Who, being loved, is poor? (And you thought romantic verse wasn't your genre....)

Sorry for not getting to this sooner, Pokey. Verizon hooked up my high-speed service several days sooner than they first indicated. So PeoplePC may have gotten the notifier e-mail in their server.

However and whatever, the best of wishes to the both of you! Life is most enjoyable when it's shared with that one special person.

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