cupid tides

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sharmi
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cupid tides

Post by sharmi » Mon May 11, 2009 9:29 am

On seashore, ringing tides tease;
sweet lovers' rapture in the breeze,
what would the beauty of the beach be;
Without their aura, just a modest sea

the washed away seashells, glisten;
with God's golden touch, cupid realm,
their foot imprints on wet sand's face;
and enamored eyes in ecstasy embrace

abandoned alone, would the beach be;
without the passionate hearts to see,
the tides arise and jump in delight;
on the sight of kisses in twilight.

sharmi may 2009

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Re: cupid tides

Post by Jeff Guest » Mon May 11, 2009 10:57 am

This would make a fantastic ecard, this is absolutely beautiful Sharmi!!! AWESOME!!!
"For God’s mercy reaches unto the heavens, and His truth unto the clouds" (Psalm 57:10, NKJV).

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Re: cupid tides

Post by Brenda Pike » Mon May 11, 2009 8:16 pm


SHARMI, BEAUTIFUL POEM, VERY DESCRIPTIVED OF THE SEA, GOD AND LOVE. COULD HEAR AND SEE THE TIDES ROLLING IN. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR EMOTION OF LOVE. SINCERELY

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Post by ImSaved2 » Tue May 12, 2009 12:31 pm

You have painted a word portrait to delight all the senses! I know there is no other place I would rather be than beside the sea with the one I love!
Be completely humble and gentle; be patient, bearing with one another in love. Eph. 4:2

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Post by webmaster » Wed May 13, 2009 12:23 am

I love it Sharmi! This very vivid poem makes a great ecard:

http://nethugs.com/love/cupid-tides/

I hope you like what I did with your beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing such a gem with us. Thank you also to Jeff who nominated this one.
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Re: cupid tides

Post by sharmi » Wed May 13, 2009 9:58 am

thanx jeff...for the lovely comments and nominating this one for an ecard..I am throughly excited and may take my writings more seriously in stuff, rhyme and meter....hereafter.. : )

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Re: cupid tides

Post by sharmi » Wed May 13, 2009 9:59 am

thanx for the warm comments..brenda pike..God bless u : ) ♥♥♥

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Re: cupid tides

Post by sharmi » Wed May 13, 2009 10:01 am

ya agree with u 100%...thanx for the lovely comments...appreciate very much...♥♥♥

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Re: cupid tides

Post by sharmi » Wed May 13, 2009 10:03 am

thanx for the ecard and the comments...a beautiful card woww...just loved it.... you r a kind soul webmaster...God bless : )♥♥♥

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Re: cupid tides

Post by ImSaved2 » Wed May 13, 2009 10:24 am

CONGRATULATIONS!!! The card is beautiful!!! Our Skipper is the best!!!
Be completely humble and gentle; be patient, bearing with one another in love. Eph. 4:2

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Re: cupid tides

Post by sharmi » Wed May 20, 2009 11:23 am

ya I agree skip is the best....thank u..God bless ♥♥♥ : )

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